Patrick, your elevator pitch is articulated very well and it is apparent that you have done your research, based on the information provided in the pitch. Your proposed MMY program is fascinating and has a beneficial purpose to the community. Your mention of "Investing in the community" was a very good selling point and choice of framing overall. I enjoyed the pitch and the innovative service proposed.
Patrick, your elevator pitch is articulated very well and it is apparent that you have done your research, based on the information provided in the pitch. Your proposed MMY program is fascinating and has a beneficial purpose to the community. Your mention of "Investing in the community" was a very good selling point and choice of framing overall. I enjoyed the pitch and the innovative service proposed.
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